If you increase your depth of field a bit and even out your lighting a bit you're gonna shoot some excellent pictures. EDIT: nevermind, I see you're shooting on a smart phone. No control over depth of field!
I actually really like the look of a narrow depth of field! Agreec, need to work on the lighting, but thrilled to get these pics on my tablet and a $9 macro adaptor!
You can use your phone, with a lens that cost less than a nip of decent single malt, and take pics like that? Well done
I really feel they are good value for the buck. Here's mine taken with a $5 one that I have. But I gave up after a while as it made me realised I need to send more watches in to the watchmaker for cleaning.
