The sweep seconds hand looks fat because of the exposure setting on your phone/point'n'shoot camera. I think it's OK.
You will get better pics outside on a cloudy day, or next to a window with plenty of light. Hang a white sheet over the window to diffuse the light and lessen shadows.
(Wow, listen to me, the great photo expert who still uses a point'n'shoot myself
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